Each month, we give you a few sentences which would all benefit from some careful use of your red editing pen. As writers, and regular readers of Writing Magazine, you should not find any of these too difficult. But if you would welcome a little help, you can always check out Richard Bell’s suggested solutions below.
Here are this month’s examples:
1 Her meeting with the fiction editor took place quite by chance at Wendy’s party, but it proved to be the worse possible influence on her career leaving her prospects in the shade.