Red Editing Pen
Each month, we give you a few sentences which would all benefit from some careful use of your red editing pen. As writers, and regular readers of Writing Magazine, you should not find any of these too difficult. But if you would welcome a little help, you can always check out Richard Bell ‘s suggested solutions below.
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TRAIN YOUR BRAIN
Here are this month‘s examples:
1 In assessing the draught of the longest of the two books, Sybil was caught unaware by the differences of style.