Red Editing Pen
TRAIN YOUR BRAIN
Each month, we give you a few sentences which would all benefit from some careful use of your red editing pen. As writers, and regular readers of Writing Magazine, you should not find any of these too difficult. But if you would welcome a little help, you can always check out Richard Bell’s suggested solutions below:
Here are this month’s examples:
1 Eileen had somehow wrestled control of the writing group and encouraged it to focus on fiction although they included many non-fiction writers who, by amiable agreement, remained as members.