Red Editing Pen
Each month, we give you a few sentences which would all benefit from some careful use of your red editing pen. As writers, and regular readers of Writing Magazine, you should not find any of these too difficult. But if you would welcome a little help, you can always check out the suggested solutions below.
Here are this month’s three:
1 Clive felt some uneasiness about writing a novel that included so many characters based on real life, amid them being one modelled on his own brother
2 Jeanette’s opinion was that your unlikely to meet someone whose courtesy was so effective as her manager’s in handling difficult customers.But, she also thought that her manager was rarely ever polite to her staff.